Qwuazzi's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spooktober 16: "Guts"]

Pretty big heart. Very nicely done!

[Spooktober 15: "Mushrooms"]

There was a skit on youtube that had a bunch of heroes that weren't in the Avengers movies, and one of them was Moon Knight. He was yelling about how no one knew who Moon Knight was, even though he was super important, and I didn't know who he was either.

Anyways, I love the mouth you did for him! It's always super creepy when characters have their lips connected in one way or another. He fits the spooktober vibe well!

[Spooktober 14: "Teeth"]

He looks like he's ready to take a bite out of Spider-Man. The only thing I can suggest is maybe go deeper into the tendrils breaking off of him, have some cpming off is chest or stomach. Though I understand there is only so much that can be done under a time crunch. It is still very well done! I love the blur affect you did for him!

[Spooktober 13: "Stars"]

Now I'm just waiting for blood to start dripping and that would make it a real Kirby boss.

Still very visually distinct despite the simple shape!

HeartisttheArtist responds:

What is it with Kirby bosses and being unholy eldritch nightmare beings?

[Spooktober 12: "Bones"]

Lemme just uh, steal this for a reaction folder.

HeartisttheArtist responds:

*snap* That's going in my reaction folder.

[Spooktober 11: "Gravestone"]

I'm pretty amazed by the affect you got on the glass, and even when dead, she looks beautiful! Hopefully she doesn't come back to life and terrorize London for a few months, but I don't think many would complain.

[Spooktober 10: "Familiar"]

To be honest, I have a hard time seeing how the glowing stuff is a lion, but that's just my feeble monkey brain not comprehending it all.
Other than that, the left hand looks kinda robotic, like the thumb is disconnected from the rest of the hand. I think if you made the bit between the thumb and the rest of the fingers flatter, and/or shift the thumb down a little bit it would look cleaner. I dunno though. Just a suggestion.

HeartisttheArtist responds:

Hey, thank you for being honest! I wish I'd managed my time better, and not rushed this piece. Again, thank you for the constructive criticism!

[Spooktober 9: "Pumpkin"]

It definitely cooled down since then. But I can see what you meant by "hot". I like the shading you did on this piece, letting the light be softer from the moon.

[Spooktober 8: "Third Eye"]

I really like how you did the pupils. The way it just looks like a bunch of rushed circles to implicate insanity is an aesthetic that I love.

[Spooktober 26: "Needle"]

I love Hollow Knight and its awesome that you've drawn some for it! Congrats Zach!