Oh wow, that was really cool!
Oh wow, that was really cool!
I enjoyed it a lot, but my only issue is that the animation goes really quickly at one point, then pauses for two or three seconds in what I assume is an attempt to let things be taken in. It's a cool animation technique, letting moments be more impactful, but using it over and over, one right after another takes away from that a little bit. Some things could be sped up and let the animation smooth out a little between specific action scenes, but other than that I thought you did fairly well!
Ah, I see what you mean with the usage of the lulls in animation. It can appear to cause some pacing issues in the fight scenes. I'll make sure to take that into consideration! Thank you for the comment!
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